Date: Thu, 18 May 2017 10:43:28 -0600 From: Adam Weinberger <adamw@adamw.org> To: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> Cc: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r318468 - in stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1: hardware readme Message-ID: <83CC5C29-230F-4033-B2A6-90E81D403A79@adamw.org> In-Reply-To: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org> References: <201705181624.v4IGOBPb013236@repo.freebsd.org>
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> On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> wrote: >=20 > Author: gjb > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 > New Revision: 318468 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 >=20 > Log: > Fix grammar nits. >=20 > Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation >=20 > Modified: > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml >=20 > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > = =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml = Thu May 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml = Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ > </itemizedlist> >=20 > <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but > - believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > + believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. = I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be = supported by &os; as well:". >=20 > <itemizedlist> > <listitem> > @@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ > </itemizedlist> >=20 > <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested > - but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > + but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> Same here. # Adam --=20 Adam Weinberger adamw@adamw.org https://www.adamw.org
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