Date: Thu, 09 Dec 2010 22:31:54 +0900 (JST) From: Ryusuke SUZUKI <ryusuke@FreeBSD.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: newbies page (ppp) Message-ID: <20101209.223154.193764232.ryusuke@jp.FreeBSD.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] Hello, "Resorces for Newvies" page, http://www.freebsd.org/projects/newbies.html >The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is a lot of documentation >to help. You might start with at least those parts of the Handbook that are relevant >to your needs, and explore the ppp page for links to the other valuable information >and the latest updates. "The first thing many people need to set up is ppp,..." Do you agree? I suspect that many people need not set up ppp these days. How about the following patch? diff -u -r1.58 newbies.sgml --- newbies.sgml 9 Aug 2009 12:58:45 -0000 1.58 +++ newbies.sgml 9 Dec 2010 13:23:06 -0000 @@ -70,9 +70,8 @@ beginners. You do not have to know much about anything to enjoy this one.</p></li> - <li><p>The first thing many people need to set up is ppp, and there is - a lot of documentation to help. You might start with at least those - parts of the + <li><p>There is a lot of documentation to help for setting up ppp. + You might start with at least those parts of the <a href="&url.books;/handbook/index.html">Handbook</a> that are relevant to your needs, and explore the <a href="http://www.awfulhak.org/ppp.html">ppp page</a> Regards, Ryusuke [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk0A2koACgkQG5rRvmPSlyQ+7QCg6egknV2JW7EZrCFItOjivAKH ZM4AoInHoFrCZ+tGf81V7dJqaAopDYrb =uBLn -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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