Date: Fri, 3 May 2002 21:59:07 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/37722: Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205031959.g43Jx7tG079518@gothic.blackend.org>
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>Number: 37722
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Punctuation typos in section 2.3 of the Handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Fri May 03 13:00:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Marc Fonvieille
>Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386
>Description:
In section 2.3 of the Handbook, periods are used instead of colons, and
a comma instead of a period. Look below at the patch for more details.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Apply the patch to handbook/installation/chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.org Fri May 3 21:47:09 2002
+++ chapter.sgml Fri May 3 21:46:35 2002
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@
<important>
<para>By default, the installation will not make any changes to your
- disk(s) until you see the following message.</para>
+ disk(s) until you see the following message:</para>
<literallayout class="monospaced">Last Chance: Are you SURE your want continue the installation?
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@
<step>
<para>Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the
- boot process will then get to this point.</para>
+ boot process will then get to this point:</para>
<screen>Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt.
Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _</screen>
@@ -785,7 +785,7 @@
<step>
<para>Irrespective of whether you booted from floppy or CDROM, the
- boot process will then get to this point.</para>
+ boot process will then get to this point:</para>
<screen>Hit [Enter] to boot immediately, or any other key for command prompt.
Booting [kernel] in 9 seconds... _</screen>
@@ -1044,7 +1044,7 @@
<para>You can now save these changes, and move on to the next step
of the install. Press <keycap>Q</keycap> to quit the device
- configuration interface. This message will appear.</para>
+ configuration interface. This message will appear:</para>
<screen>Save these parameters before exiting? ([Y]es/[N]o/[C]ancel)</screen>
@@ -1077,7 +1077,7 @@
turns on scrolling in the display. You can then use the arrow keys, or
<keycap>PageUp</keycap> and <keycap>PageDown</keycap> to view the
results. Press <keycap>Scroll Lock</keycap> again to stop
- scrolling,</para>
+ scrolling.</para>
<para>Do this now, to review the text that scrolled off the screen when
the kernel was carrying out the device probes. You will see text
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
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