Date: Mon, 03 Nov 2003 22:07:47 +0100 From: Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz> To: Maksim Yevmenkin <m_evmenkin@yahoo.com> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: PR docs/52514 (Bluetooth handbook chapter) Message-ID: <1067893666.27473.10.camel@hood.oook.cz> In-Reply-To: <20031103203538.82709.qmail@web40309.mail.yahoo.com>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] V po, 03. 11. 2003 v 21:35, Maksim Yevmenkin píše: > Dear Hackers, > > i'm trying to atack few open Bluetooth-related PR's. PR docs/52514 > has Bluetooth chapter for handbook. i've modified it a bit and would > like to commit it (see attached). > > if anyone from doc-committers would like to work with me on this, i'd > really appreciate this. Hi Maksim, I read it and I have a suggestion. SDP section should be updated to document sdpcontrol usage, which is now in base, instead of sdptool (ports/ in your snapshot). Do we have sdpd in base? Otherwise it looks good, I like a short explanation paragraphs at the beginning of every section. -- Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz> What do we know about love? Love is like a pear. Pear is sweet and have a specific shape. Try to exactly define the shape of a pear. -- Marigold: 50 Years Of Poetry [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQA/psOintdYP8FOsoIRAqRmAJsGu/kQxXVq4lnuWuZc2l9OtuNZEgCeM1Xt pfWfD1xSK2mF4IhVKk404pM= =olJR -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----home | help
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