Date: Sun, 1 Jun 2003 14:49:49 -0700 From: Jim Mock <jim@FreeBSD.org> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: RFC: Quick review for an install chapter patch Message-ID: <F7E761E0-947A-11D7-9EAE-000393460DB2@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030528114506.56fe32e6.trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, at 08:45 AM, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> I've attached a patch for review. This should be a drop-in replacement
> for the MS-DOS Q&A section in the troubleshooting section. Any
> comments
> would be of a great help to me.
Comments/fixes below. I've snipped most of the diff out so it's easier
to find them.
+ You first need too defragment your MS-DOS partition using the
Windows™
"too" -> "to"
+ <application>DEFRAG</application> utility (go into Explorer,
right-click on
I don't think "DEFRAG" needs to be all caps, unless it's actually called
that since it's not an acronym.
+ <para>There is also a very useful product from PowerQuest called
Maybe add a link to PowerQuest's site?
+ if you plan to add/remove operating systems often. It does cost
money, and if
+ you plan to install &os; once and then leave it there,
<application>fips</application>
"It does cost money, and if you plan to install &os; once and then
leave it there" -> "It does cost money, so if you plan to install &os;
and keep it installed"
+ <application>Double Space™</application> application. Therefor
the file
"Therefor" -> "Therefore,"
- jim
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