Date: Tue, 17 Jul 2001 14:35:41 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200107172135.f6HLZfW91588@freefall.freebsd.org>
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murray 2001/07/17 14:35:41 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users chapter.sgml
Log:
Wrap author attribution in <chapterinfo>.
Reword a couple of run-on sentences to use better subject-verb
agreement.
Terminate all items in a list with a period, not just some of
them.
Add <username> and <application> tags as appropriate.
"pw(8) has the information"
doesn't look well without the benefits of a hyperlink. Reword this to:
"For more information, please see pw(8)."
Update example to change shells to zsh since tcsh is now in the base
system.
Revision Changes Path
1.14 +62 -52 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml
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