Date: Sat, 8 Dec 2001 10:23:14 +0000 From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org> To: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: if you feel like reviewing... Message-ID: <20011208102314.G98994@clan.nothing-going-on.org> In-Reply-To: <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org>; from mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org on Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500 References: <20011206140729.A5683@blackhelicopters.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Thu, Dec 06, 2001 at 02:07:29PM -0500, Michael Lucas wrote: > Well, since I got my commit bit shortly before both my esteemed mentor > and I left town, Nik suggested that I have -doc review things. I'm > still not going to commit them until bmah approves of them, mind you, > but I'm more comfortable if folks have every possible chance to shoot > things down before I go near the repo. > > At www.blackhelicopters.org/~mwlucas/patches you'll see my uncommitted > work (and a directory of old crap, please ignore). Comments welcome. authors.ent Fine contributors.patch Fine goals2 You've got a relative link to the copyright page. That's not going to work when people are looking at the FAQ locally. Best to make it a full link to the license at http://www.FreeBSD.org/ Apart from that, fine. mirror-web Fine release-made Almost fine. In "mirror-web" you removed the "Certainly!", in this one, you retained "latest goodies". Perhaps "latest changes" or "latest technologies" would be better? Your call. tracking-release Fine. N -- FreeBSD: The Power to Serve http://www.freebsd.org/ FreeBSD Documentation Project http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/ --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F 94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 --- [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjwR6hEACgkQk6gHZCw343WlMwCeLpSKySjae8eFIjE3Jwm6UZ6n 8asAn33FYhJHXkq3KDykb8+ljyduvNlF =97XE -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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