Date: Wed, 23 Apr 2014 20:28:36 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44640 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks Message-ID: <201404232028.s3NKSam9024464@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Wed Apr 23 20:28:36 2014 New Revision: 44640 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44640 Log: Fix grammo. Remove no longer needed sentence. Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Wed Apr 23 20:27:03 2014 (r44639) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml Wed Apr 23 20:28:36 2014 (r44640) @@ -649,12 +649,9 @@ da0: <STECH Simple Drive 1.04> s/n <para>The &os; Ports Collection provides several utilities for burning and duplicating audio and data <acronym>CD</acronym>s. - Which tool to use to burn a <acronym>CD</acronym> depends - on whether the <acronym>CD</acronym> burner is an - <acronym>ATAPI</acronym>, <acronym>SCSI</acronym>, or - <acronym>USB</acronym> device. This chapter demonstrates the + This chapter demonstrates the use of several command line utilities. For - <acronym>CD</acronym> burning software with a graphical, + <acronym>CD</acronym> burning software with a graphical utility, consider installing the <package>sysutils/xcdroast</package> or <package>sysutils/k3b</package> packages or ports.</para>
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