Date: Sun, 6 Jan 2008 20:08:07 +0000 (UTC) From: Gabor Kovesdan <gabor@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: www/en/internal fortunes.sgml Message-ID: <200801062008.m06K876S050756@repoman.freebsd.org>
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Modified files:
en/internal fortunes.sgml
Log:
- Reword a paragraph to be politically neutral [1]
- Reword a part with the word poignant so that non-native English speakers
can understand it without a dictionary [2]
- Remove the non-offensive list as everything belongs to this category which
does not meet the conditions of offensitivity [2]
- s/will/may/
- Whitespace
PR: www/118284 [1]
Submitted by: bsam [1], wilko [2]
Reviewed by: wes
Approved by: core
Revision Changes Path
1.6 +8 -17 www/en/internal/fortunes.sgml
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