Date: Thu, 18 Aug 2011 00:13:19 GMT From: Ben Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/159854: grammar updates for carp.4 Message-ID: <201108180013.p7I0DJgD084157@red.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201108180020.p7I0K77d078164@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 159854 >Category: docs >Synopsis: grammar updates for carp.4 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Aug 18 00:20:07 UTC 2011 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Ben Kaduk >Release: 9-current >Organization: MIT SIPB >Environment: n/a >Description: Some grammar fixups for carp.4 (also a piece of markup). There was also a long line and trailing whitespace in one spot, so I have a separate whitespace.diff.txt to be applied prior to the main diff. I only get one attachment in the webform, so the second diff will come in as a reply to the ticket. >How-To-Repeat: man 4 carp >Fix: Patch attached with submission follows: --- carp.4.orig 2011-08-17 14:12:08.000000000 -0400 +++ carp.4.whitespace 2011-08-17 14:13:19.000000000 -0400 @@ -38,7 +38,8 @@ .Nm interface is a pseudo-device that implements and controls the CARP protocol. -CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local network to share a set of IP addresses. +CARP allows multiple hosts on the same local +network to share a set of IP addresses. Its primary purpose is to ensure that these addresses are always available, but in some configurations .Nm @@ -184,7 +185,7 @@ event. Please see .Xr devd.conf 5 -and +and .Sx EXAMPLES section for more information. .Sh EXAMPLES >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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