Date: Mon, 25 Jan 2016 21:32:45 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r48094 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing Message-ID: <201601252132.u0PLWj58047227@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Mon Jan 25 21:32:44 2016 New Revision: 48094 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48094 Log: Add some inexplicably missing words and reword a few sentences for clarity. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Mon Jan 25 21:22:06 2016 (r48093) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.xml Mon Jan 25 21:32:44 2016 (r48094) @@ -118,11 +118,11 @@ Starting lpd.</screen> <para>Printers are connected to computer systems in a variety of ways. Small desktop printers are usually connected directly to - computer's <acronym>USB</acronym> port. Older printers are + a computer's <acronym>USB</acronym> port. Older printers are connected to a parallel or <quote>printer</quote> port. Some printers are directly connected to a network, making it easy for - multiple computers share them. A few printers use a much less - common serial port connection.</para> + multiple computers to share them. A few printers use a rare + serial port connection.</para> <para>&os; can communicate with all of these types of printers.</para> @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Starting lpd.</screen> job, <filename>ulpt0</filename> resets the <acronym>USB</acronym> port. Resetting the port can cause problems with some printers, so the - <filename>unlpt0</filename> device is used instead. + <filename>unlpt0</filename> device is usually used instead. <filename>unlpt0</filename> does not reset the USB port at all.</para> </listitem> @@ -187,9 +187,9 @@ Starting lpd.</screen> <para>Several communication parameters must be known to communicate with a serial printer. The most important are - <emphasis>baud rate</emphasis> and + <emphasis>baud rate</emphasis> or <acronym>BPS</acronym> (Bits Per Second) and <emphasis>parity</emphasis>. Values vary, but typical - serial printers often use a baud rate of 9600 and no + serial printers use a baud rate of 9600 and no parity.</para> </listitem> </varlistentry> @@ -1042,8 +1042,8 @@ lp: <para>All of the documents print on that single printer. When the Sales department grows enough to need their own printer, - the alias is removed from the shared printer entry and used - as the name of the new printer. Users in both departments + the alias can be removed from the shared printer entry and used + as the name of a new printer. Users in both departments continue to use the same commands, but the Sales documents are sent to the new printer.</para> </sect3> @@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ lp: <sect3 xml:id="printing-shared-headers"> <title>Header Pages</title> - <para>Users can have difficulty locating their documents in + <para>It can be difficult for users to locate their documents in the stack of pages produced by a busy shared printer. <emphasis>Header pages</emphasis> were created to solve this problem. A header page with the user name and document name @@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ lp: <para>Enabling header pages differs depending on whether the printer is connected directly to the computer with a <acronym>USB</acronym>, parallel, or serial cable, or - is connected remotely by the network.</para> + is connected remotely over a network.</para> <para>Header pages on directly-connected printers are enabled by removing the <literal>:sh:\</literal> (Suppress Header)
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