Date: Sun, 15 Dec 2002 20:39:50 +0000 From: Nik Clayton <nik@FreeBSD.org> To: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira <lioux@FreeBSD.org> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: (review plz) Documenting MASTER_SITES:n code Message-ID: <20021215203950.GD2816@clan.nothing-going-on.org> In-Reply-To: <20021208234934.3628.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> References: <20021208234934.3628.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here>
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--UfEAyuTBtIjiZzX6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Dec 08, 2002 at 09:49:12PM -0200, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wr= ote: > That was the previous documentation. :) I've just finished > writing a thourough documentation for MASTER_SITES:n feature. [...] > http://people.freebsd.org/~lioux/book.html.gz#PORTING-MASTER-SITES-N Thanks for the updates. Having read that, I'd tack your new section 4.4.7.2 ("Detailed information") on to the end of the existing section. =20 IMHO the replacement for the main body of 4.4.7 doesn't add to the=20 original text, and in the replacement text I'd prefer to see fewer=20 informal phrases ("explain in HUGE scary detail") which we've been=20 slowly excising from the Handbook. I haven't had a chance to look over the actual markup yet. N --=20 FreeBSD: The Power to Serve http://www.freebsd.org/ (__) FreeBSD Documentation Project http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/ \\\'',) \/ \= ^ --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F 94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 --- .\._/= _) --UfEAyuTBtIjiZzX6 Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.1 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE9/OiVk6gHZCw343URAh3wAKCLC7+QH6hWL83QK+jeTPYjSHFCKgCeJgOB JDWwQ5kL02IIdT3UGRCB6Ng= =VeaR -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --UfEAyuTBtIjiZzX6-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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