Date: Sun, 4 May 2003 20:41:38 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: simon@nitro.dk, murray@FreeBSD.org, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/50790: [patch] Expand description of dumpdev use in Developers Handbook Message-ID: <200305050341.h453fcei080409@freefall.freebsd.org>
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Synopsis: [patch] Expand description of dumpdev use in Developers Handbook State-Changed-From-To: open->closed State-Changed-By: murray State-Changed-When: Sun May 4 20:40:03 PDT 2003 State-Changed-Why: I've committed an update to this paragraph that takes into account your original change and Chris' improvement. One thing to note is that it doesn't look good to use the man page entities twice in close proximity. So I used &man.dumpon.8; the first time, then just used <command>dumpon</command> elsewhere in the paragraph. This chapter needs a lot of work, so if you can make any more extensive grammar improvements throughout this chapter it would be much appreciated. Thanks. http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=50790
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