Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 265267] portmgr is Ports Management Team, so "the portmgr team" is a strange phrase Message-ID: <bug-265267-9-lAGodeSyfo@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/> In-Reply-To: <bug-265267-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=265267 --- Comment #1 from Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> --- Also, whilst there … 1) superfluous uppercase: > … responsibilities, The Ports Management Team may … – should be lowercase t (the); the Ports Management Team 2) the unordered list of nine items, two of which comprise two sentences, I would: a) make each listing begin lowercase b) where there's a second sentence within a point, make it a separate point with additional indent c) punctuate only the final listing with '.' – compare with the style of the four-point list under <https://www.freebsd.org/portmgr/policies/#_assure_the_integrity_of_the_ports_collection>. All subject to approval by portmgr@ and core@ -- You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.home | help
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