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Date:      Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000
From:      bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org
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Subject:   [Bug 265267] portmgr is Ports Management Team, so "the portmgr team" is a strange phrase
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--- Comment #1 from Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> ---
Also, whilst there =E2=80=A6


1) superfluous uppercase:=20

> =E2=80=A6 responsibilities, The Ports Management Team may =E2=80=A6

=E2=80=93 should be lowercase t (the); the Ports Management Team


2) the unordered list of nine items, two of which comprise two sentences, I
would:

   a) make each listing begin lowercase

   b) where there's a second sentence within a point, make it=20
      a separate point with additional indent

   c) punctuate only the final listing with '.'

=E2=80=93 compare with the style of the four-point list under
<https://www.freebsd.org/portmgr/policies/#_assure_the_integrity_of_the_por=
ts_collection>.=20


All subject to approval by portmgr@ and core@

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