Date: Sun, 11 Jun 2000 21:01:11 GMT From: Salvo Bartolotta <bartequi@neomedia.it> To: Daniel Harris <dannyboy@subdimension.com> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html Message-ID: <20000611.21011100@bartequi.ottodomain.org> In-Reply-To: <3943A11B.CA085B@subdimension.com> References: <200006102350.QAA07428@freefall.freebsd.org> <20000611.12230300@bartequi.ottodomain.org> <3943A11B.CA085B@subdimension.com>
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original Message <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< On 6/11/00, 3:24:27 PM, Daniel Harris <dannyboy@subdimension.com> wrote regarding Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html: > How about just rewriting the whole sentence <g>... example for the > 4.4Docs: > `` > If you like to read BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of= > the 4.4BSD documents from /usr/share/doc, where you will find the > documents on a FreeBSD machine (if you install the doc distribution). > '' Sounds good :-) The (compound) sentence is simple and "linear". The clause introduced by where sounds (to me) as a coordinated main clause (where you will find ... =3D and there you will find ...). Others might probably prefer "if you have installed", but I am afraid this is just a matter of taste. I hope we have missed nothing else ... Best regards, Salvo To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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