Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:03 GMT From: Tom <trh411@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/176451: (patch) Handbook Ch 25.7 typos and incidental edits Message-ID: <201302262049.r1QKn3MQ048390@red.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201302262050.r1QKo0Ap069056@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 176451
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: (patch) Handbook Ch 25.7 typos and incidental edits
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Tue Feb 26 20:50:00 UTC 2013
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Tom
>Release: 9.1-RELEASE GENERIC
>Organization:
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>Environment:
>Description:
Suggested corrections to typos and incidental editing of FreeBSD Handbook, Chapter 25, Section 7. Ref:
/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml (r41051)
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Patch attached.
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml 2013-02-18 13:25:18.000000000 -0500
+++ chapter.xml 2013-02-26 14:42:20.000000000 -0500
@@ -1813,8 +1813,8 @@
up-to-date, refer to <xref linkend="synching"/> for detailed
help about synchronizing to a newer version.</para>
- <para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle than
- it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have
+ <para>Updating the system from source is a more subtle process
+ than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have
found it necessary over the years to change the recommended
approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable
dependencies come to light. The rest of this section
@@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Some configuration changes must be done before the new
+ <para>Some configuration changes must be made before the new
world is installed, but others might break the old world.
Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are
generally needed.</para>
@@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@
<para><command>mergemaster</command></para>
<para>Repeated to update the remaining configuration files,
- not that the new world is on disk.</para>
+ now that the new world is on disk.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@
<para><emphasis>Do not</emphasis> save the output in <filename
class="directory">/tmp</filename> as this directory may be
cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is
- <filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename>or in
+ <filename class="directory">/var/tmp</filename> or in
<username>root</username>'s home directory.</para>
</sect3>
@@ -2234,8 +2234,7 @@
<para>To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command
reads instructions from the <filename>Makefile</filename>,
which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should
- be rebuilt and the order in which they should be
- built.</para>
+ be built and the order in which they should be built.</para>
<para>The general format of the command is as follows:</para>
@@ -2542,7 +2541,7 @@
<sect3>
<title>Manual Update</title>
- <para>To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy
+ <para>To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy
over the files from
<filename class="directory">/usr/src/etc</filename> to
<filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and expect it to
@@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@
<para>Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the
new <filename class="directory">/etc</filename> and other
- files into. <filename
+ files into <filename
class="directory">/var/tmp/root</filename> is a reasonable
choice:</para>
@@ -2898,7 +2897,7 @@
<listitem>
<para>Turn off profiling by setting
<quote>NO_PROFILE=true</quote> in
- <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>).</para>
+ <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
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