Date: Mon, 31 Mar 2014 06:28:41 -0700 (PDT) From: Dru Lavigne <dru.lavigne@att.net> To: Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net>, "freebsd-doc@freebsd.org" <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: en/handbook/audit: proposed corrections Message-ID: <1396272521.45856.YahooMailNeo@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> In-Reply-To: <20140329161905.GB92398@gamma.ukrhub.net> References: <20140329161905.GB92398@gamma.ukrhub.net>
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--2147000914-1361792676-1396272521=:45856 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable _______________________________=0A=0A> From: Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net>= =0A>To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org =0A>Sent: Saturday, March 29, 2014 12:19 PM= =0A>Subject: en/handbook/audit: proposed corrections=0A> =0A>=0A>=A0 Good d= ay, doc@ folks.=0A>=0A>=A0 There're a few things that could be improved wit= hin audit chapter of our=0A>handbook.=A0 However, those are just notes, whi= ch might require more polishing=0A>or wordsmithing.=A0 So, can anyone revie= w and/or comment the following *.diff?=0A=0A=0A=0AThanks, Taras.=0A=0AA sli= ghtly modified patch is attached. 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